What the..?

[planetary]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5136534/1/The_Demon_inside

Its bad enough that its a crappy crossover of 5D's with Naruto and the only 5D's character in there(Yusei of course) does jack shit in the fic. And its a mpreg(though thank god Yusei isn't knocked up) annnd I haven't seen much of Naruto(only a few random episodes of some exam and the first ep) but I can tell Sasuke would never call Naruto "Naru-chan" which is pretty damn bad.


This is the kicker in the author's notes

"Edward: We have never watched yugioh 5ds, so if we get something wrong then please forgive us."

NO WORDS JUST NONE I AM SPEECHLESS

Comments

[pleuvoir.livejournal.com]

Sauce-gay: Naru-chan! Naru-chan! I'M GOING TO DESTROY KONOHA, NARU-CHAN!

[thiefqueenriyo.livejournal.com]

I lol'd.

"I'VE NEVER SEEN THIS SHOW, SO I FEEL COMPELLED TO WRITE BAD CROSSOVERS WITH IT. =D"
Good job.

[fox-holland.livejournal.com]

The world needs more mpreg... ;3;
Then again... my governor is Arnold Schwarzenegger* ...

*thank you spell-check ;;

[nikil-san.livejournal.com]

I don't mind crossovers when they make sense or if they are written well. UGG! I hate Mpreg.

I'm currently sporking a worse fanfic than that, and I'm slowing going insane working on it since it's so damn long! And it's only one chapter too. DX

[hautalken.livejournal.com]

I'M DETECTING LARGE AMOUNTS OF FAIL IN THIS SECTION SIR.

[northwind-gale.livejournal.com]

AAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH.

I COME BACK FROM VACAY AND THE FIRST THING I SPY IS THIS.

DDDDDDDDDDDDDD8888888

FAIL. FAIL.

CLEARLY I AM BRAINDEAD OR I WOULD NOT BE CAPSLOCKING LIKE THIS.

OR MAYBE I WOULD.

I DUNNO.

[atorasu.livejournal.com]

*SOBS*